Make the following corrections to the essay below. Also provide more research and useful info. Please follow the rubric also provided below.

  • Format – Table 1-5 must have a citation at the bottom.
    • A table this large belongs in the Appendix and should be referred to in the body of the paper.
  • History – Only one sentence is actually history and the is 1961.What happened since then?The rest of this section belongs in an introduction as it describes the company.
  • Talent Management Statement.Good statement, but it seems like it is just stuck in there.Be sure to attribute it.
  • Other Factors – What is the latest news?Check news magazines.