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the following is professors remarks

Hi Theodore : Total points earned (rounded): 117 out of 150 (78%). Task Requirements points earned: 30 out of 37.5 (80%). Demonstration and application of knowledge points earned: 66 out of 82.5 (80%). Academic writing and format points earned: 21 out of 30 (70%). Strengths: thought process is well laid out and appropriately researched. Opportunities for improvement: Missing the actual risk analysis process as evidenced by the use of the FEMA Risk Analysis Matrix. This is not the format of a professional-style or quality document as you would be presenting/providing to decision makers.